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Today I am here, at work calmly until two o'clock p.m. Then I must go to my brother's house because we celebrate my niece first comunion. (it's a sacred ritual). I'm wearing blue navy trousers and white shirt with thin blue stripes.
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Today I am here ,at work at my workplace, calmly working until two o'clock p.m. Then, I must have to go to my brother's house because we are going to celebrate my niece first comunion. (it's a sacred ritual). I'm wearing blue navy trousers and a white shirt with thin blue stripes.
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In general your grammar was really nice, I just did some slight changes to it to make it sound a little bit better. Hope you enjoyed your niece's comunion and keep practising!
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