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Life! Life sometimes could be hard, some days you feel that you can touch the sky and others you feel that anything doesn't make sense. Maybe that is the nicest thing to be alive, you never know what is next and it could be an amazing thing. Live the present and don't think too much in tomorrow!

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Life!

Life can sometimes be hard. Some days you feel that you can touch the sky and others you feel that nothing makes sense.
Maybe that is the nicest thing about being alive, you never know what is next and it could be something amazing. 
Live in the present, and don't think too much about tomorrow!

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Life!

Life can sometimes be hard, some days you feel that you can touch the sky and others you feel that nothing makes sense.
Maybe that is the nicest thing, to be alive. You never know what is next and it could be an amazing thing.
Live the present and don't think too much about tomorrow!

 

Hello Rebecaluck,

 

Nice philosophy! And just a few corrections in English. Well done.

NB 'Nothing' is already negative  so you don't ned to use 'doesn't' as then you have a double negative which is often positive!

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Life!

Life sometimes could be hard, some days you feel that you can touch the sky and others you feel that anything doesn't make sense.
Maybe that is the #most nice) thing to be alive, you never know what is next and it could be an amazing thing. (You do not know what is it going to happen and it could be amazing)
Live the present and don't think too much in tomorrow!

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Actually, I think so!

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