My sister :D My first essay.............

Today, I want to write about my eldest sister. Now, I would like to describe her. Her name is Ngoc and she is twenty five years old. She is good listener and she always listens my problems and gives me advice. She can make me better. This is why I want to write about her.

First, she is a very caring. She always has a kind word to everyone. Last year, when we were traveling, she prepared to plan for the tour very fast and cautiously. Now, she is having a baby girl and she buys super cute clothes for her daughter super cute. Every morning, she goes to the supermarket to buy food and she cooks well. I enjoyed her fried chicken from her and it tastes super tasty. (It would be more natural to say: I tasted her friend chicken and it was delicious)

Second, she is hard-working. Everyday, She gets up very early every day and she makes breakfast for my family and does housework. She is an accountant. She worked for my father’s business. She works on a computer and counts money very fast, She works very efficiently.

Third, she is very gracious. She took care of my friends when they visited my home. She speaks well. Her neighbor really likes to talk with her. She made my parents feel satisfied with their business (or: owning a business). When I have a problem, she always helps me solve it. Her friends always call her to hang out.

And finally, She is sentimental. She really like drama films when she has free time. Five years ago, she had a cute dog. When it died, she cried a lot. When I was sad, she made me smile and bought a lot of games for me. On mother’s day, She said thank you mom in a card and gave mom a dress.
I like her very much. She is like a second mom in my life. This is my great eldest sister.