Pollutions in my city - Pollution is always singular.  In plural we say 'Types of pollution'.

Pollution is one of the most important issues for most cities and villages around the world. Nowadays we use many products that are producing huge damaged for (1) our environment.

(1) causing widespread damage / causing a lot of damage...

On one hand, I live in a small village. In my village, there aren't any big factories; the amount of traffic is not too much and we live are surrounded by for trees, due to this, the pollution is not a problem as serious (2) as in other towns, bigger than mine. The fumes are not an important problem in my town. However there are other types of pollution, such as water pollution and ground pollution. 

(2) as serious a problem as...

The main economic activity in my village is agriculture; due to most farmers using several chemical products to eliminate the pests of insects, these products can be very dangerous for human beings. Therefore in spring season (you can say springtime), people should take carefully with the places where they visit in our countryside. If children touch plants or land with any residue / remains of these products, they can be poisonous.

These products not only are dangerous for the air that we breathe in, unless additionally/moreover they are harmful for the water too. These products are absorbed by the ground and they can reach sources of underground water. This water can later be used for human consumption.

On the other hand, the regional government is trying to control these poisonous substances (3). Farmers can use other ecological substances to achieve (4) the same results with their crops. Using of (5) these products get benefits in their taxes, so many of (6) farmers are changing their products.

(3) poisonous substances OR poisons.

(4) alcanzar - achieve results, to reach something (physical object)

(5) Use of these products OR Using these products

(6) many farmers / a lot of farmers

In my opinion the pollution is not a problem in my town. Not the normal pollution. We have other types of pollution but only for a short period of time, in spring. Of course, it would be quite good that people using less the car (7), although this is not even a big problem.

(7) if people used their cars less / for people to use their cars less.

Great job, Juan Carlos!  Well done!  If there's anything you need me to clarify, don't hesitate to ask me!

Leigh

Pollution  in my city

Pollution is one of the most important issues for most cities and villages around the world. Nowadays we use many products that are producing huge damaged for our environment.

In one hand, I live in a small village. In my village, there are not big factories; the amount of traffic jam is not too much and we live surround for amid trees, due to the pollution is not a problem as serious as in other towns, bigger than mine. The fumes are not an important problem in my town. However there are other types of pollution, such as water pollution and ground pollution

The main economy activity in my village is agriculture; due to most farmers use several chemical products to eliminate the pest of insects. These products can be very dangerous for humanbeing. Therefore in spring season, people should take carefully with places where they visit in our countryside. If children touch plants or land with any rest of these products, they can be poisoned.

These products not only are dangerous for the air that we breathe it, unless they are harmamid But also for the water too. These products are absorbed by the ground and they can reach source of underground water. This water can be used later to human consumption.

On the other hand, the regional government is trying to control these poison substances. Farmers can use other ecologic substances to reach the same results with their crops. Using of these products get benefit in their taxes, so many of farmers is changing their products.

In my opinion the pollution is not a problem in my town. Not the normal pollution. We have other type of pollution but only for a short period of time, in spring. Of course, it would be quite good that people using less the car, although this is not even a big problem