First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is Bervin. I'm a high school student. I live in shanghai,china My hobbies are listening to music(britpop hardrock) ,watching movies ,playing baske

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is Bervin. I'm a high school student. I live in shanghai,china My hobbies are listening to music(britpop hardrock) ,watching movies ,playing basketball,etc.And I like meeting interesting people. I'm interested in many different cultures.And hope to make friends with many people from around the world.

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britpop and hardrock should be Britpop and hard rock. Other than that Megin corrected everything. Nice job! 你英文写的很好。

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Bervin.
I'm a high school student.
I live in Shanghai, China.
My hobbies are listening to music (I like britpop and hardrock the best), watching movies, playing basketball, etc.
And of course I also like meeting interesting people!

I'm interested in many different cultures. And hope to make friends with many people from around the world.

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Hi! Welcome to italki!

This was already very fluent, I just changed it to sound more native. But really, everything was correct! :)
Good luck with your studies!

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