First note
This is my first note.
I'm italian, and live in Rome. I love my city, monuments and streets.
When I think to change city, I go to the center of my city, I see the best monuments in the world, and I decide to stay here.
I love so much my city, that my job is to accompany the turist with private and luxury car, in tour in Rome.
Do you visited Rome? Do you liked it?
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First note
This is my first note.
I'm italian, and live in Rome. I love my city, monuments and streets.
Nationalities always start with a capital letter in English.
Add a conjunction and delete the comma.
When I think to change city, I go to the center of my city, I see the best monuments in the world, and I decide to stay here.
Incorrect phrasal verb: of changing my city
I love so much my city, that my job is to accompany the turist with private and luxury car, in tour in Rome.
Word order and conjuction: my city so much because
Spelling: tourist
Article: a private luxury car
Tip: try to make your sentences shorter with only 1 or 2 ideas and then you will make less mistakes
Do you visited Rome? Do you liked it?
Incorrect use of tense: Have you visited Rome? (present perfect) Do you like it? (simple present)
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