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Will God bless the ones who always give their help out Some days ago I found a sad news telling about a 92 years English Granny who had been helping others on her whole life. Unfortunately, she died last week because of the hundreds of letters asking for her donation. What a sad ending!!! What is your feeling about this thing? In addition to feel sorry for this old kind woman, do you want to help other as her do? What I think is that when you help people the first time, they will be very grateful, but if you help them many many times, then they will think your help is your responsibility, you should help. In my view, give out our help blindly is not good for the society. Because it can make some people lazy, they want gains but don't work hard. I wish the kind Granny a happy life in heaven.

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Will God bless the ones who always give their help out

Some days ago I found a sad news (which is) telling about a 92 years English Granny who had been helping others on (for) her whole life. Unfortunately, she died last week because of the hundreds of letters asking for her donation.
What a sad ending!!! What is your feeling about this thing? In addition to feel (feeling) sorry for this old kind woman, do you want to help other as her do (she did)?
What I think is that when you help people the first time, they will be very grateful, but if you help them many many times, then they will think your help is your responsibility, you should help.
In my view, give (giving) out our help blindly is not good for the society. Because it can make some people lazy, they want gains but don't work hard.
I wish the kind Granny a happy life in heaven.

Good Work though,  some little silly mistakes yet you have a good command :)

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