My vacation was very fun although I didn't travel, but I liked it because I just slept and ate a lot.On this vacation I didn't do excercise, on my other vacation I did, I went to Atacames beach with my parents, brother, cousin and my dog, it's name is minie, it's a beautiful pitbull and a very good dog, it likes the beach, but it doesn't like to take a shower at the beach or my house. My cousin and I played the playstation game "Call of duty black ops 2",this game is very fun, it is my favorite game.

my vacation

On My vacation was very fun my although I wasn't travel travelling, but I like liked it beacuse I just I slept and ate a lot.  On this vacation I didn't do excercise, but on my other vacation I did. I went to Atacames beach with my parents, brother, cousin and my dog, .  It's name is Minie, and it beautiful.  Minie is a pitbull, and it is very good dog, . It likes the beach, but it doesn't like to takes take a shower at the beach or my house. Bisides with Besides, my cousin and I played the playstation the game "Call of dutty Duty black Black ops Ops 2", . This game is very funny, and it is my favorite game.

My vacation was very fun, although I wasn't travelling, I liked it. I just slept and ate a lot. On this vacation I didn't exercise where as on my other vacation I did. I went to Atacames beach with my parents, brother, cousin and my dog, it's name is Minie, a beautiful Pitbull, it is a very good dog. It likes the beach but doesn't like to take showers at the beach or my house. Anyway, my cousin and I played Playstation, we played the game "Call of Duty Black Ops 2", this game is very funny, it is my favorite game.

(Not necessarily needed but it would be better to write your dog's gender, it sounds a little strange without. You did great though, please continue to study hard! ^o^)