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Tunisian Revolution before the revolution, Tunisians had regarded rebelling as something forbidden and risked for so long. Their fear from the excuted power had made them into slavery. But when "Mohamed bouazizi"(that guy who split fire on himself) burn himself from discrimination, mistreatment, overopression and agressivity, a new consience have emerged as if Tunisians seemed to feel each others insides. The protests begun in Sidi Bouzid and quickly spread all over the country. fortunately it leads to our congradulated revolution. However we can't say that we totally secceed in our revolution; yes we put an end for the dictater rigime and for the totalitarian practices but we still have a lot to do : we have to stand on our feet woth our country and we have to garantee that our requests are taken into consider. it's our right to get equal apportunities for self-improvement and for self-betterment

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Tunisian Revolution

Before the revolution, Tunisians had long regarded rebelling as something forbidden and risky. Their fear of the government's power had forced them into slavery. But after Mohamed Bouazizi (that guy who set fire on himself) burned himself in response to the government's discrimination, mistreatment, opression and agression, a new consience emerged, and it seemed as if Tunisians could feel each others insides. The protests begun in Sidi Bouzid and quickly spread all over the country. Fortunately it led to our congratulated revolution. However we can't say that we have totally secceed in our revolution; yes we put an end for the dictator rigime and its totalitarian practices, but we still have a lot to do: we have to stand on our feet with our country and we have to guarantee that our requests are taken into consideration. It's our right to get equal opportunities for self-improvement and for self-betterment.

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hope too..It'd take a lot of time to resettle our country
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I hope that you and your countrymen see further improvements in your local circumstances.
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MashaaAllah, this was a very rich entry! :) I am not an English expert, but I recommend that you use an English dictionary to check over your spelling. Here's a wonderful one: http://www.vocabulary.com/ You can also try this one too, InshaaAllah: http://www.wordreference.com/
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The Tunisian Revolution
Before the revolution, Tunisians had regarded rebelling as something forbidden and risky for so long. Their fear from the power placed on them had compelled (forced) them into slavery, but when Mohamed Bouazizi (*the guy who set himself on fire) burn himself from discrimination, mistreatment, (extreme) oppression and aggression, a new conscience had emerged, as if Tunisians seemed to feel each others' insides. The protests begun in Sidi Bouzid and quickly spread all over the country. Fortunately, it lead to our exemplary revolution, however we can't say that we totally succeeded in our revolt (uprising). Yes, we put an end to the dictatorial regime and also the totalitarian practices, but we still have a lot to do. We have to stand alongside our country, so that we can be guaranteed that our requests are taken into consideration. It's our right to get equal opportunities for our self-development and self-improvement (self-betterment).

 

*The guy who self-immolated himself.

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