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My last days in Sacramento I cant believe that i have been in Sacramento since january...and im leaving in less than a week. This trip has been, by far, one of the best experiences of my life! At first i was very scared because i came to live with my mothers cousin...i didnt know Her! I met Her the day she picked me up at the AirPort haha. I had the opportunity to go to college ( esl classes) and i met wonderful people from all over the world: irán, russia, korea, japan, etc. I find interesting learning about others cultures. Also i traveled all over the place, i went to napa, San José, San Diego, san Francisco, Santa Cruz, i made a road trip from LA back to Sacramento, California coast is amazing ???????? But tha best part is that i had the chance to meet my family, they aré wonderful people, very hospitable, i felt in home! Im going to feel lonely in my house, because my mexican family is not close at all. But i have to go back and get a job, too much vacation for me haha Ana

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My last days in Sacramento

I cant believe that I have been in Sacramento since January...and I'm leaving in less than a week. This trip has been, by far, one of the best experiences of my life! At first I was very scared because I came to live with my mothers cousin...I didnt know her! I met her the day she picked me up at the airport haha.
I had the opportunity to go to college ( ESL classes) and I met wonderful people from all over the world: Iran, Russia, Korea, Japan, etc. I find it interesting learning about other cultures.
Also I traveled all over the place, I went to Napa, San Jose, San Diego, San Francisco, Santa Cruz, I made a road trip from LA back to Sacramento, California coast is amazing!!!!!!! 
But tha best part is that I had the chance to meet my family, they are wonderful people, very hospitable, I felt at home! I'm going to feel lonely in my house, because my Mexican family is not close at all. But I have to go back and get a job, too much vacation for me haha

NOTES:

Hi Ana. I didn't have to make too many corrections. Good job with the English! Most of what I changed was capitilzation. For example, "I" is always capitalized, and "Her" is only capitalized at the start of a sentence. Also, names of countries always start with a capital letter. 

 

Also, in English, we never use the accents. So "San Jose" and "Iran" instead of "San José" and "Irán". It drives me bonkers when I try to type something in Spanish, because I never know where to put them! ;)

 

Glad you enjoyed your stay in Sacto (a common slang for Sacramento). It is a great place!

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