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My trip to the Philippines. / please, correct phrases, maybe sentences, mistakes /
I have just returned at home from my traveling. I was in the Philippines again. It was the fourth time. I like this country. Every time new places is give new impressions impresses. I travelled with my friends, who are divers. I'm not a diver but I like to travel with them.
In this trip were two a big stations from which we went islands hopping around . At first was in the Malapaskua. It is a small island, but I love it. My first meeting with Phillippines began with this island two years ago. I remember my feelings when I stepped on the land after a long way to it. It was night, moonlight, silvery sand and palm trees, shining plankton in the sea - as like at the cinema, Paradise!-thinkied me. I thought.
But the island havewas destroyed after the typhoon last year, there were broken a lot of broken Palm trees, houses , but peoples not suffer and now all is restored.
The divers like this place because there are sharks-foxs and of course other inhabitants. Sharks sleep there and then go to the sea. It a possible to see them about 5 o'clock in the morning.There I had a good rest time , did some meditation, went swimming, and snorkelling. I like to watch the sunrise and sunsets - it'sthey're amazing. Every moment the sky, clouds and sea are changing. It isThere are fantastic views. There We were there for 7 days and then we moved to Mindanao Island. It is a big beautiful island. Besides the same pleasure from rest time I saw two unique miracles there. There were a huge mollusks about 1-1.3 meters long in the length and jellyfish which could not to sting because they haven't didn't have the cage on feelers to producted poison. The first were near the hotel where we stayed. It was a fantastic show. On the white sand lie lay(past simple) the gigantic mollusks like in the fantastic film " Cocoon ". The water was a very clear and I could to see them a very well. They could to break the leg of divers easy easily but my friends were careful. The body on the mollusks were white, nacreous with shades of green and turquoise,- amazing.There is a private zone. The second miracle werewas jellyfishes. You can found out information about il in the them on Google , those that it live in Palao. But it isthey are in the Phillippines too. This place is near Mindanao called "Bucas grand island ". Socorro, Surigao del Norte. It is a group of islands and the jellyfish live inside this area. "It is possible to get there only outflow time when to open underground cave through which float by a small boat." = Needs rephrasing
They really are not stinging don't sting and I kept them in my hands. They are a very beautiful. I spent a nice two days there. It is a really beautiful places .
Now I am at home but I know that will go to the Philippines again.
I don't think I checked your spelling of the Philippines, each time. But that's the correct spelling.
Hope this helps!
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