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I have a Funny Hairstyle.
After the state examination (I took) last week, I have *been dine with a lot of my friends. However, their first words were not (like) "How are you?" "Long time no see." and so on, but "What's going on with your hair?" or "Did you cut your hair by yourself?"
Actually I had my hair cut by the hairdresser, but I wonder whether my new hairstyle looks funny (or not)
*I went out to eat
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I have a funny hairstyle.
After the state examination (I took) last week, I have been dining(eating out) with a lot of my friends. However, their first words were not like "How are you?" "Long time no see." and so on, but "What's going on with your hair?" or "Did you cut your hair by yourself?"
Actually I had my hair cut by a hairdresser, but I wonder whether my new hairstyle looks funny or not.
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I have a funny hairstyle.
After the state examination I took last month, I have been dine with a lot of my friends. However, their first words were not like "How are you?" "Long time no see." and so on, but "What's going on with your hair?" or "Did you cut your hair by yourself?"
Actually I had my hair cut by hairdresser, but I wonder whether my new hairstyle looks funny or not.
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