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Terrible Day
I woke up at about at noon today. I thought I could be lazy because I though I had almost nothing to do after finals of this semester. But I knew one thing was left which I thought was one page long or something. The only thing I was sure of was that it's due today. So I went to school cafeteria, ate OK food, and returned to home. Then I checked the guidelines explanation of the assignment online. It said "write a 4-5 paper." Then I was like "what? What kind of person Japanese is capable of that! with it" But it couldn't be helped. All I just have to do was just do it. I continued restarted reading the guidlines of the paper. "Single space"... I died. The sky was so clear and blue. Birds are were singing beautiful songs. Sorry, I think I'm little bit drunk. Never mind. After I came back to reality life, I continued restarted reading again the guideline. It said "You need to include an interview." I couldn't help but smile. I still have'nt done didn't do it yet.
After all In the end, I managed to finish do it. I don't remenber how I did it, but anyway I submited the paper online. Now I'm free!! Yeah!!
I tried to make it fun for you guys :) Please correct my notebook!
It was fun! Haha so I corrected just a few grammatical errors, they are in red. The other corrections just helped with the flow of the entry.Thank you!
Terrible Day
I woke up about at noon today. I thought I could be lazy because I though I had nothing to do after finals of this semester. But I knew one thing was left (to do), which I thought was a one-page-long paper or something. The only thing I was sure of/about was that it's due today. I went to the school cafeteria, ate OK food, and returned to home. Then I checked the explanation of the assignment online. It said, "write a 4-5 paper." Then I was like thought, "What? What kind of Japanese is capable with it to do that that?" But it couldn't be helped. All I have to could do was just do it. I restarted reading the guidline of the paper, "Single space...." I died. The sky was so clear and blue. Birds are were singing beautiful songs. (Sorry, I think I'm little bit drunk. Never mind.) After I came back to life, I restarted reading the guideline. It said, "you need to include interview." I couldn't help but smile. I didn't do it yet.
After all, I managed to do it. I don't remenber how I did it, but anyway, I submited the paper online. Now I'm free!! Yeah!!
I tried to make it fun for you guys :) Please correct my notebook!
It was so fun to read! Thank you :)
In English, the tense of a paragraph is supposed to all be the same; however, sometimes it just sounds really weird, so it can tempting to put it in a different tense. This is the reason I put that one part in parenthesis; it is more of an aside than an integral part of the paragraph.
Terrible Day
I woke up about at about noon today. I thought I could be lazy because I thought I had nothing to do after finals of this semester. But I knew one thing was left which I thought was one page long or something. The only thing I was sure was that it was due today. I went to the school cafeteria, ate OK food, and return to home. Then I checked the explanation of the assignment online. It said "write a 4-5 page paper." Then I was like "what? What kind of Japanese person is capable with of it that" But it couldn't be helped. All I have had to do was just do it. I restarted reading the guidline of the paper. "Single space".... I died. The sky was so clear and blue. Birds are singing beautiful songs. Sorry I think I'm little bit drunk. Never mind. After I came back to life, I restarted reading the guideline. It said "you need to include an interview." I couldn't help but smile. I didn't do it yet.
After all, I managed to do it. I don't remenber how I did it, but anyway I submited the paper online. Now I'm free!! Yeah!!
I tried to make it fun for you guys :) Please correct my notebook!
Terrible Day
I woke up about at noon today. I thought I could be lazy because I thought I had nothing to do after finals of this semester. But I knew one thing was left which I thought was one page long or something. The only thing I was sure about it was, it's due today. I went to school cafeteria, ate OK food, and returned home. Then I checked the explanation of the assignment online. It said "write a 4-5 page long paper." Then I was like, "what? What kind of Japanese is capable with it" But it couldn't be helped. All I have to do was just do it. I restarted reading the guideline of the paper. "Single space".... I died. The sky was so clear and blue. Birds are singing beautiful songs. Sorry, I think I'm little bit drunk! Never mind. After I came back to life, I restarted reading the guideline. It said "you need to include interview." I couldn't help but smile. I didn't do it yet.
After all, I managed to do it. I don't remenber how I did it, but anyway I submited the paper online. Now I'm free!! Yeah!!
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