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I am grateful for any help with correcting any of my mistakes ^_^
I went shopping with my friend and I wrote some notes,maybe very simple details, but as I am a novice I wondered who can correct my English context?
I met my friend Samar on Saturday at 2:00 P.M as we had agreed.
First we looked at new collections, they were very beautiful and too expensive. However, I had taken out enough money. I bought a pink dress,a red blouse and a white hat.
My friend bought a gray skirt, a red blouse and a yellow hat.
We had gotten ourselves confused at the shoes store, there had been many new models and all were elegant. After about one hour of trying them on, we bought a pair of high-heeled shoes for ourselves and I lent my friend a sum of money when she needed it.
After we finished shopping, we decided to get some ice cream and then went back at home about 5:00 P.M.
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