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About me :) Hi friends, Tonight, I want to talk about myself. I am 23 years old and I am software developer. I graduated from university in 2011. I am working since July 2011. I worked at engineering company before I am at software company now. I love my job and I need to learn English for my job. Almost everything is English in my job. I like to write code and create somethings. If you are a programmer, you have to always improve yourself because "a new technology is being introduced almost every day" (i translated this sentence from yandex, please explain which tense). I like swimming, walking, coding :) research about programming, cinema, etc. And I like English because English is very fun to speak for me. :) If you want to learn Turkish, please write me. I am new in this site and I loved this site. I will try to write something every day... Thank for your helps...

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About me :)

Hi friends,

Tonight, I want to tell you a little bit about myself. I am a 23 year old software developer. I graduated from university in 2011. I have been working since July 2011. I worked at engineering company before moving to the software company I work for now. I love my job and it requires me to learn English. Almost everything is English in my job. I like to write code and create thing. If you are a programmer, you always have to improve yourself because new technology is being introduced almost every day.

I like swimming, walking, coding :) researching about programming, going to cinema, etc.

And I like English because I think it is very fun to speak. :)

If you want to learn Turkish, please write to me. I am new to this site and I love it. I will try to write something every day...

Thanks for your help...

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Hi friends, 


Tonight, I want to introduce myself. I am 23 years old and I am software developer. I graduated from university in 2011. I have been working since July 2011. I worked at an engineering company before, and I am at a software company now. I love my job and I need to learn English for my job. Almost everything is in English at my job. I like to write code and create things. If you are a programmer, you always have to improve yourself because new technologies are being introduced almost every day.

I like swimming, walking, coding :)  and research about programming, cinema, etc.

And I like English because English is very fun to speak for me. :)

If you want to learn Turkish, please write me. I am new to this site and I love this site. I will try to write something every day...

Thank for your help...

 

NOTES:

- "Tonight, I want to talk about myself" is grammatcally correct, but "tonight, I want to introduce myself" sounds much better.

 

- "a new technology is being introduced almost every day" is OK, but "new technologies are being introduced almost every day" is a bit better. I don't know what yandex is, but am going to look it up after finishing these corrections. :)

 

-I went to Turkey last year. Istanbul, Ayvalik, Izmir, and Antalya. Everyone was very friendly, and I loved the food!

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