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About me :)
Hi friends,
Tonight, I want to tell you a little bit about myself. I am a 23 year old software developer. I graduated from university in 2011. I have been working since July 2011. I worked at engineering company before moving to the software company I work for now. I love my job and it requires me to learn English. Almost everything is English in my job. I like to write code and create thing. If you are a programmer, you always have to improve yourself because new technology is being introduced almost every day.
I like swimming, walking, coding :) researching about programming, going to cinema, etc.
And I like English because I think it is very fun to speak. :)
If you want to learn Turkish, please write to me. I am new to this site and I love it. I will try to write something every day...
Thanks for your help...
Hi friends,
Tonight, I want to introduce myself. I am 23 years old and I am software developer. I graduated from university in 2011. I have been working since July 2011. I worked at an engineering company before, and I am at a software company now. I love my job and I need to learn English for my job. Almost everything is in English at my job. I like to write code and create things. If you are a programmer, you always have to improve yourself because new technologies are being introduced almost every day.
I like swimming, walking, coding :) and research about programming, cinema, etc.
And I like English because English is very fun to speak for me. :)
If you want to learn Turkish, please write me. I am new to this site and I love this site. I will try to write something every day...
Thank for your help...
NOTES:
- "Tonight, I want to talk about myself" is grammatcally correct, but "tonight, I want to introduce myself" sounds much better.
- "a new technology is being introduced almost every day" is OK, but "new technologies are being introduced almost every day" is a bit better. I don't know what yandex is, but am going to look it up after finishing these corrections. :)
-I went to Turkey last year. Istanbul, Ayvalik, Izmir, and Antalya. Everyone was very friendly, and I loved the food!
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