An informal letter
Hello Noa
I am happy to hear about you.
In my country the teenage boys liketo play football, Does your brother like it?
You can buy him a soccer ball, or soccer clothes. Also they like the video games, like playstation or x-box, my little brother is always playing with his playstation.
If your brother has one you can buy him a new video game
If you don´t know yet you always can give him a few money.
When are you going to come over? I am waiting for you !
Good luck !
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An informal letter
Hello Noa
I am happy to hear from about you.
In my country, the teenage boys like to play football. Does your brother also like to play it?
You can buy him a soccer ball or soccer clothes. Also they like the video games such as like playstation or x-box. My little brother is always playing with his playstation.
If your brother has one you can buy him a new video game
If you don´t know yet what to get him you always can give him some a few money.
When are you going to come over? I am waiting for you !
Good luck !
Well done Clara! Only minor corrections were required. Keep up your good work!
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