Could anybody correct these sentences?

Good afternoon! My name is Laura Gómez and today I’m going to introduce you a job that has caught my attention and may be interesting to you: Executive Housekeeper.
• The description of the job
Well, firstly, you need to know that an Executive Housekeeper is the person who manages the housekeeping staff and their activities in order to maintain the hotel in a clean, sanitary and orderly condition for the safety and security of staff and guests.
• The skills and qualifications required/requirements
There are plenty of skills that you must have in order to get this job, but I have made a brief summary of the most important from my point of view:

(Perhaps it's just me but transitioning from the above to "moreover" is a bit awkward)
Moreover, there are other qualifications which are a must in order to become an executive housekeeper.
Regarding the key responsibilities of the job, you’ll have to manage several areas like...
• Make comments on the differences you may find on the different websites consulted (this doesn't really follow from the sentence with the ellipsis, grammatically)
I realised that there are some differences between the websites I have consulted for this presentation. For example, there is much more information on Kronostm.com, but prices are only specified on Caterer.com.
Furthermore, requirements and responsibilities may vary depending on the hotel, but, on the whole, all of them have the same needs.
Lastly, the interface is more attractive on Kronostm.com because of its soft colors and its clear presentation.

• Give an answer to the question “What aspects of the job interest you the most?
To conclude my presentation, I’m going to give you my opinion about the most interesting aspects of this job.
I think that the great dedication required for this job is admirable as well as all the areas that you have to manage if you want to become an executive housekeeper. (Are you saying here that the areas are admirable?)
That’s why I believe this job is a constant challenge that can make you very mentally strong.

That’s all; I hope you have found this information interesting and thank you very much for listening.