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(1) Why is the problem that obese people is rising for governments? - This sentence is not grammatically correct. A sentence that would make sense may be: Why are rising obesity levels a problem for the government?

(2) The bill would penalize the parents of children who fail to follow the recommendations

(3) At least take one minute to explain your opinion.

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6. According to statistics issued by the government, the number of obese people in Korea is on a rapid rise. Why is obesity dangerous? Why is this a problem for governments? Do you have any good suggestions to decrease the number of obese people?


7. Lawmakers in Puerto Rico are mulling a contentious bill that aims to punish the parents of obese children. The proposed legislation would identify students who are obese and recommend diet and exercise programs for them to lose weight. The bill would penalize the parents of children who fail to follow the recommendations. What do you think of this legislation? Please take a minute to give us your opinion!

Hello,

These are interesting questions, I have just cleaned them up a little.

In question 6 you talk about the 'problem of obese people', you can use the pronoun 'this' to refer to them without repeating the phrase.

In Question 7 we use 'who' not 'to' (This may have just been a slip!) and at the end it is better to use the expression 'to give somebody your opinion'

Hope this helps