Corrections · 3
Hi Dean,
Thanks for sharing this story about your day! Please find my corrections below :)
Original:
Play chase
Today I went to school, and I play chase with my friends. It was fun, and we like it. I like to play chase!
Edited:
Playing chase
Today I went to school, and I played chase with my friends. It was fun, and we liked it. I like to play chase!
Notes:
Not far off the mark! As a rule, you'll want to stick to the same tense whenever you're writing something. In this case, you're telling a story about the past, so make sure your verbs (to play, to like) are in the past tense. Hope this helps!
Best of luck,
Charlie
Playing chase
Today I went to school, and I played chase with my friends. It was fun, and we liked it. I like to play chase!
Playing chase
Today I went to school, and I played chase with my friends. It was fun, and we like it. I like to played chase!
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