My first day

I received had my first English class three hours ago and I am very happy about this. The teacher is very good and I like her method of teaching. , and f For that these reasons, I will repeat take another lesson with her.
I studied English when I was more younger, wen I went to the high school, but I have not studied since thisthen. Now, I know my English is very bad and poor. HomeweverHowever, I will work hard to improve it. I hope it. (Not sure what you want to say here)

This was very well written for someone new to English! You will definitely improve very quickly if you work hard. Good luck!

My first day

I received my first English class thee hours ago and I am very happy about this. The teacher is very good and I like her method of teaching, and for that reason I will talk with her.
I studied English when I was younger: when I went to the high school, but I have not studied since that. Now I know that I have poor English. However, I will work hard to improve it, I hope..

My first day.

I had my first English class three hours ago and I am very happy about this. The teacher is very good and I like her method of teaching and for that reason I will have another lesson with her.
I studied English when I was more younger, when I went to the high school, but I have not studied since then. Now, I know my English is not very good. However, I will work hard to improve it. I hope!

 A very well written exercise. Well done.