My day

Hi friends...I want to share about my day with you all.
TODAY was my operating system exam. I had studied for it before, but I had not reviewed the material before my exam...and I did it perfectly. My semester exams are coming up so I want to do my best this time, but unfortunately I don't study according to the requirements. I want to focus on my studies, can you people suggest some ways of concentrating in my studies? :)

This was great and I hope you did well on your exams. English punctuation is very different from Hindi, so it's important to know. For example, an ellipsis (...) is always three dots and you put it where you'd make a big pause if you were talking.

My day

Hi friends..i want to share the day of activities with all of you.
TODAY it was my operating system's exam..i had studied for the exam though i had not revised it.Instead of it i have done my exam perfectly.The semester exams are heading in front of me. Therefore, I would like aprriciate my best for this time. Unfortunately I didn't study according to the requirement.I want to focus on my study. Can somebody/anyone suggest me better way of concentrating in mind for do study carefully.!! :)

Maybe it is helpful to you. Actually my English isn't so good. But I try it for myself.