Could you guys check my grammar on this sentence ! Thank you!
Hello! My name is Thiago Ferreira, 19, I live in Brazil. Currently I work during the day and going to college at night, for my IT studies.
My day is very busy. I leave home at 7:00am, stay all day out, get back to home at 5:00pm, and then I get on the bus toward to my college. Then I arrive home at 11:30pm ! I always try to read or listen something in english for my self-improvement on my free time during lunch, or bus. But I usually don't pratice conversation, so I still have to improve it (a lot)
On my free time I hang out with my girlfriend and study english.
That's is, thank you for reading !
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Could you guys check my grammar on this sentence ! Thank you!
Hello! My name is Thiago Ferreira, 19, I live in Brazil. Currently I work during the day and going to college at night, for my IT studies.
My day is very busy. I leave home at 7:00am, stay all day out, get back to home at 5:00pm, and then I get on the bus toward to my college. Then I arrive home at 11:30pm ! I always try to read or listen to something in english for my self-improvement on my free time during lunch, or bus. But I usually don't pratice conversation, so I still have to improve it (a lot)
On my free time I hang out with my girlfriend and study english.
That's is, thank you for reading !
Apart from the highlighted part I added it was very well written, but you don't 'listen music', you 'listen to music'. I hope you understand the correction and that this helps you!
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