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When I was a Little girl:
-I liked to play dolls. Now i use the computer, ipod,usb
This things are important for to study because it save my information about homework.
-I liked to see cartoons on tv
Always i watched tv late and the weekends I woke up later. Remember I saw movies using VHS, this object is old. Now I use blue ray when i want to see a movie in my house.Also i wake up early because i have to go to work and study. When i return at home, i like to see a programas on tv.
-when I was 5 age I could not to ride a bike. I remember suffered several falls.
At that time my father taught me to ride a bike. Now I can .In the future i would like to learn to drive a car.
-Another thing, when i was Little girl i do not knew cook.
Therefore my mother cooked me when i went to school every day.Now I can cook. When i was 15 my mother taught me to cook.This is important because When i am home alone, i can cook myself.
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When I was a Little girl:
-I liked to play with dolls. Now i use the computer, ipod,usb
These things are important for studying because they save my information for homework.
-I liked to see cartoons on tv
I always watched tv late into the night and on the weekends I woke up late. I Remember that I saw movies using a VHS video player, this object is now obsolete. Now I use a blu-ray player when i want to see a movie in my house. Also i wake up early because i have to go to work and study. When i return to home, I enjoy watching programs on tv.
-when I was 5 years old I could not to ride a bike. I remember that I suffered several falls.
At that time my father taught me to ride a bike. Now I can (?) .In the future i would like to learn to drive a car.
-Another thing, when i was Little girl i did not know how to cook.
Therefore my mother cooked for me when i went to school every day. Now I can cook. When i was 15 my mother taught me how to cook. This is important because when i am home alone I can cook for myself.
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