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the traffic Today i goed to home to 6:30 pm and i now what terrible its the traffic in those hour. i live in lima, capital to Perú, and here the people walk to everyplace, to the train, to the meter, to the bus, etc... No much controller The traffic in lima and this was converter a disaster. An any places can too much people, in other places more cars and on the bus the people sleeped, principally the old people. This is too stressfull to me, i latered 1:40 hours in come to my house. but in this time i writen in this diary and listen music in english.

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the traffic

Today I went home at 6:30 pm and I know how terrible the traffic is in those hour. I live in Lima, capital to Perú, and here the people walk to every place; to the train, to the meter, to the bus, etc...
No much controller The traffic in lima and this was converter a disaster.  The traffic in Lima is out of control and is a disaster waiting to happen.
An any places can too much people There are too much people everywhere,  in other places more cars and on the bus the people sleeped, principally especially the old people.
This is too stressful to me, i latered after 1:40 hours (an hour and fourty minutes) in come to my house I'm home but in this time i have  written in this diary and listen music in english.

 

*That's terrible! You sit in traffic for 1.40 hours every day??

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the traffic

Today i (went home at) 6:30 pm and i (knew how) terrible (the traffic would be). i live in lima, capital to Perú, and here people walk (everywhere), to the train, to the meter, to the bus, etc...
(Traffic isn't very controled and can become a distaster.)
An any places can (have) too (many) people, in other places more cars and on the bus the people (sleep), principally the old people.
This is too stressfull to me, (It took ) 1:40 hours (to get home). but in this time i (wrote) in this diary and (listened to) music in english.

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My heart goes out to you. Around here people think that the traffic is bad but my Peruvian friends just laugh at the thought.

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