My kimono
Two years ago I made a kimono for my photo of University. It was fantastic because I chose the accessories, the colors etc. When I finished it I felt very very happy. Everything were how I was imagined. The kimono fabric was beautifu, it had red flowers and a brown topknot. Obviously I'd like to do it again because, when I have a passion I like to do the better. I've tired when I did it but now it's not important.
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My Kimono
Two years ago I made a kimono for my University photo of University. It was fantastic because I chose the accessories, the colors and so on. etc. When I finished it I felt very very happy. Everything was just as I had were how I was imagined. The kimono fabric was beautiful, it had red flowers and a brown trim topknot. Obviously I'd like to do it again because, when I have a passion, I like to improve it. do the better. I've I was tired when I had finished did it but now it's not important.
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My kimono
Two years ago I made a kimono for my university photo. It was fantastic because I chose the accessories, the colors etc. When I finished it I felt very very happy. Everything was how I imagined. The kimono fabric was beautiful, it had red flowers and a brown topknot. Obviously I'd like to do it again because when I have a passion about something (or when I am passionate about something), I like to do it even better (or I like to improve it). I was tired when I did it but now it's not important.
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