My weekend

Last weekend my dear cousin Cris got married to her prince Justo. It was not the typical wedding. She is not a woman in her twenties or thirties. It is her second wedding. A dream come true. My cousin is adorable, always smiling, always loving, and the fact that she had to go through difficult times being able to keep that smile on her face makes her even more adorable. She got married to her school boyfriend right after college and long after, when they were going to welcome home their little adopted Chinese little daughter, her husband decided to stop everything and ask for a divorce. It was a terrible blow for her because she could not understand what the heck was going on... but life goes on and she had to rebuild hers. She focused on her profession and she reached important senior positions in the administration. But one day she met him. You could say he was not the perfect guy. He had three young kids and had just got divorced and Cris thought that life with him would be really complicated. But he never gave up and fought for her and love won. She quit her highly considered respected and well-paid job and found a new one near him. Her family, most of it them, didn't like her new life. They are too religious and conservative and they think she should accept that she is still married in the view eyes of God and, thus, she must live as a widow for the rest of her life. But she chose happiness and on Saturday they got it. Nothing could disturb that precious moment of happiness and as one person said there " You must make sure you keep your eyes wide open not to fail to see so you don't miss the important things in life. And your love is the most important one". I am sooo happy for them!!

Incredibly well written. Congratulations (and to your cousin also)!

I could not find any mistakes. I made some suggestions in blue to sound more natural.