Asian Tigers Peaceful Pakistan and India is necessary for world peace. Both countries possess nuclear weapons and bitter arch-rivals since the partition of British India. Three fierce wars in 1947-194

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Asian Tigers Peaceful Pakistan and India is necessary for world peace. Both countries possess nuclear weapons and bitter arch-rivals since the partition of British India. Three fierce wars in 1947-1948,1965 and 1971 have been fought till now. Still now, the long-standing Kashmir dispute remains unresolved and escalating tensions on the borders, sometimes frequent fire exchange takes place. India is world's emerging economy and continues to flourish while the economy of Pakistan continues to sink. Pakistan's alliance with the USA in the war against Al-Qaeda in Afghanistan and the war on terror against hardline Islamist Taliban has adversely affected the slumping economy. Not only that, suicide bomb attacks, sectarian conflicts, and ethnic segregation pose an existential threat to Pakistan. On the other side, India has reached out to the USA, Canada and other regional countries for trade to bolster its economy. Well, India is on the brighter side and better placed as compared to Pakistan. If we compare Pakistan with the India, where it stands, stats are not too good. India is world's fourth largest economy. Diplomatic relations between two countries has always been in hot water. The two countries are at loggerheads over the disputed territory of Kashmir. Kashmir Conflict: At the time of British India partition, the Kashmir, a predominantly Muslim populated was ruled by Hindu Raja Hari Singh Dogar. Due to the Muslim majority, Pakistan expected the Kashmir annexation to Pakistan. Hari Singh signed its accession to India against the will of Kashmiri people, which led to first war break out between recently independent countries. Suggestions are welcome :))

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Asian Tigers

Peaceful Peace between Pakistan and India is necessary for world peace. Both countries possess nuclear weapons and have been bitter arch-rivals since the partition of British India. Three fierce wars in 1947-1948,1965 and 1971 have been fought till now taken place. Still now, the long-standing Kashmir dispute remains unresolved, and escalating tensions on at the borders, sometimes leading to frequent fire exchanges takes place. India is world's an emerging economy and continues to flourish while the economy of Pakistan continues to sink. Pakistan's alliance with the USA in the war against Al-Qaeda in Afghanistan and the war on terror against hardline Islamist Taliban has adversely affected the its slumping economy. Not only that Additionally, suicide (bombing) attacks, sectarian conflicts, and ethnic segregation pose as an existential threat to Pakistan. On the other side hand, India has reached out to the USA, Canada and other regional countries for trade to bolster its economy. Well, India is on the brighter side and better placed in a better place/position as compared to Pakistan. If we compare Pakistan with the India on where it they stands in the world/global economy, stats Pakistan's statistics are not too good. India is the world's fourth largest economy, [whereas Pakistan merely takes the __th position]. Diplomatic relations between these two countries has have always been in hot water (troublingly) bad.

The two countries are at loggerheads over the disputed territory of Kashmir.
Kashmir Conflict:
At the time of British India's partition, the Kashmir, a predominantly Muslim-populated country, was ruled by a Hindu, Raja Hari Singh Dogar. Due to the Muslim majority, Pakistan expected the Kashmir annexation to of Pakistan. Hari Singh signed its accession to India against the will of Kashmiri people, which led to the first war breaking out between the recently independent countries.

Suggestions are welcomed :))

Wow! There're so many big words and political terms! I'd just like to highlight a few points:
- "To be better placed (to)..." means "to be more qualified/able to do something". I'm not sure if you meant exactly that, but you didn't say what they were more qualified to do, so I think you meant they were in a better situation/position.
- At the end of the first paragraph, you were setting up to compare India and Pakistan by writing "If we compare Pakistan with the India", so I would suggest that you show a comparison after that. (I've included a comparison highlighted in pink).
- "To be in hot water" means "to be in big trouble" or "to be in an embarassing situation".

It is like Taiwan and China. I think that is frustating for some justic feeling and influence some people. But we should take a chance to review history we pass by. To be a person who write instead of reading. There are the same value we fight for still. So break the mode that is important. In the mode, you know how to be a hero but there are something more important being a hero. It may be very shame on the situation. But being it that need more courage than hero's. For me I like to beyond hero.

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