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The first things i did today
I woke up this morning at half past nine. I received a call of "N2" because the workers have had a problem with some phase of the job. The reason it is calledl "N2" is because this phase has accumulated more time that is habitual but it wasn't a big problem, and I had to wait to the end of this process. Once finally the phase was over i went to breakfast at a bar in the square of Merced in the center of Málaga. I ate a ham and cheese sandwich with coffee and milk, then I went back to the floor (apartment?) and now i find myself writing these lines. I feel proud because these are the first lines to begin helping me learn more and more the english language.
Thanks a lot for your corrections. ;)
se dice "a problem, one problem, some problems, two/three problems"
se dice "trouble, some trouble, no trouble" usualemente trouble no es plural excepto aquí At age 40, the man found himself with many troubles: no job, bad illness, and his wife left him
Aún si trouble es plural, nunca he escuchado I have two troubles. Dirías I have some troubles.
The first things i did today
I wa woke (el tiempo pasada) up this morning at half past nine and soon I (Yo se escribe siempre con la letra mayúscula) but before i received (el tiempo pasado) a call from (from - de parte de.... ) of "N2" because the workers had ve had a trouble with a some phase of job. , t The reason of it is called "N2" is because this phase has required accumulated more time than t is habitual but it isn't a big problem trouble, and I i have s had to wait until the end of to this process. Once finally the phase was is finally over I i went to breakfast at Merced Plaza in the in a bar of square Merced at center of Málaga. I ordered take a sandwitch of ham with cheese and coffee with milk and , then i'm I back to the flat (piso)/apartment (apartamento) floor and now i I find myself writting these lines. I'm feeling proud because these are (this - singular, these - plural) is a the first lines to begining helping me learn more and more better the e English language.
Thanks a lot for your corrections. ;)
De nada, espero que te sirva de algo mi correción.
Si necesites clases conmigo, ya sabes....sólo debes ver mi perfil y hacerme saber cuándo vas a estar disponible para hacer esa clase conmigo.
Que tengas un día genial.
The first things I did today
I woke up this morning at half past nine and soon I received a call from "N2" because the workers had had a trouble with a phase of job. The reason it is called "N2" is because this phase has required more time than is habitual but it isn't a big problem, and I have had to wait until the end of this process. Once finally the phase was finally over, I went to breakfast in a bar at Merced Plaza in the center of Málaga. I ordered a sandwitch of ham with cheese and coffee with milk, and then I went back to my flat/apartment and now I find myself writting these lines. I'm feeling proud because these are the first lines to begin helping me to better learn more of the English language.
Thanks a lot for your corrections. ;)
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