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The first things i did today I wake up this morning at half past nine but before i receive a call of "N2" because the workers have had a trouble with some phase of job, the reason of call "N2" is because this phase has accumulated more time that is habitual but it isn't a big trouble, and i has had to wait the end to this process. Once finally the phase is over i went to breakfast in a bar of square Merced at center of Málaga. I take a sandwitch of ham with cheese and coffe with milk, then i'm back to the floor and now i find myself writting these lines. I'm feel proud because these is a first lines to begining help me learn more and better the english language. Thanks a lot for your corrections. ;)

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The first things i did today

I woke up this morning at half past nine. I received a call of "N2" because the workers have had a problem with some phase of the job. The reason it is calledl "N2" is because this phase has accumulated more time that is habitual but it wasn't a big problem, and I had to wait to the end of this process. Once finally the phase was over i went to breakfast at a bar in the square of Merced in the center of Málaga. I ate a ham and cheese sandwich with coffee and milk, then I went  back to the floor (apartment?) and now i find myself writing these lines. I feel proud because these are the first lines to begin helping me learn more and more the english language.

Thanks a lot for your corrections. ;)

 

se dice "a problem, one problem, some problems, two/three problems"

se dice "trouble, some trouble, no trouble" usualemente trouble no es plural excepto aquí At age 40, the man found himself with many troubles: no job, bad illness, and his wife left him


Aún si trouble es plural, nunca he escuchado I have two troubles. Dirías I have some troubles.

 

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The first things i did today

I wa woke (el tiempo pasada) up this morning at half past nine and soon I (Yo se escribe siempre con la letra mayúscula) but before i received (el tiempo pasado)  a call from (from - de parte de.... )  of "N2" because the workers had ve had a trouble with a some phase of job. , t The reason of it is called "N2" is because this phase has required  accumulated more time than t is habitual but it isn't a big problem trouble, and I  i have s had to wait until the end of to this process. Once finally the phase was is finally over I i went to breakfast at Merced Plaza in the  in a bar of square Merced at center of Málaga. I ordered take a sandwitch of ham with cheese and coffee with milk and , then i'm I back to the flat (piso)/apartment (apartamento) floor and now i I find myself writting these lines. I'm feeling proud because these are (this - singular, these - plural)  is a the first lines to begining helping me learn more and more better the e English language.

Thanks a lot for your corrections. ;) 

 

De nada, espero que te sirva de algo mi correción. 

Si necesites clases conmigo, ya sabes....sólo debes ver mi perfil y hacerme saber cuándo vas a estar disponible para hacer esa clase conmigo.

Que tengas un día genial.

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The first things I did today

I woke up this morning at half past nine and soon I received a call from "N2" because the workers had had  a   trouble with a phase of job. The reason it is called "N2" is because this phase has required more time than is habitual but it isn't a big problem, and I have had to wait until the end of this process. Once finally the phase was finally over, I went to breakfast in a bar at Merced Plaza in the center of Málaga. I ordered a sandwitch of ham with cheese and coffee with milk, and then I went back to my flat/apartment and now I find myself writting these lines. I'm feeling proud because these are the first lines to begin helping me to better learn more of the English language.

Thanks a lot for your corrections. ;)

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