My weekend

It's another weekend. I wonder if I should go out for a hiking, but the weather is not very good. The sky is dark and full of fog and haze, which makes people very uncomfortable. Well, now I feel a little miss of that I miss the blue sky and the smell of grass in from my childhood a little. But the those days have passed me by away (passed away is mostly used to mean died)and will never ever come back forever.
It occurs to me that I have some work to do this weekend. So this weekend becomes will become another more days of work. For a young man not in the rich second generation, days are always very harsh in China. My dream, which is to make provide my family living with a better life, is not complicated. Don't you agree? But I was born into a rural family. My parents are all farmers. They are were unavailable unable to provide for my high school and my university. So I studied hard and got the chance (can also be opportunity) of free education in university; my parents are proud of me. Since my first work days, I have found that it is not an easy work job to fill the thought gap between the people in the city and me. But I'm still fighting, fighting for my dream. That's all.

Have a happy weekend and good luch luck to you.

Firstly, I have to say that your english is very easy to understand, mistakes were minor and easy to correct. Secondly, your dream is beautiful and should not be something that is so complicate to make true. Well done for getting into university! that's so great and you must of worked very hard. I hope you stay fighting until you get the life you want. However money isn't everything and a families happiness comes mostly from love; something that you definitely seem to have lots of.

thank you and good luck to you too!