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Fool action Have you ever drunk bear and wine at the same time? If yes, anything happened with you then? With me, the consequence is very terrible. I just tried them together yesterday. I must admit that was really a very fool action. It made me get headache all night. And I couldn't sleep well until closely the sunrise. I swear I will never do like this again.

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Foolish action

Have you ever (drunk bear) had beer and wine at the same time? If yes, then has anything happened (with) to you (then)? (With) For me(,) the consequence (is very) was terrible. Yesterday I (just) tried them together, (yesterday.) I must admit that it was really a very foolish (action) thing to do. (It made me get) I got a headache all night(.) and (I) couldn't sleep well until (closely) it was almost sunrise.

I swear, I will never do anything like this again.

 

You got across the main point of what you were trying to say and a some of this is written very well! I personally don't like wine and beer so don't drink it. >.< You must have been very tired the next day and I hope you are feeling better now. :)

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