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Which book have you been reading recently?
(or) Which book are you reading currently?
I'm reading "The Red Prescription" written by Bi ShuMin. (1) It's about a pair of friends, they both working in the addiction treatment center. One of them is named Jane, who is the director of this special hospital. Another (2) character is her friend who's writing a book about drug addicts. So she begs Jane to help her to pretend to a patient that she knows more about the topic. After a series of negotiations she comes to the hospital, then the story takes many twists and turns. Jane (3) leaves a posthumous paper and then commits suicide because she has a serious addiction. (4) (the muder is turn out to be one of her patients, and it cause a painting this pantient present to her as a gift.)
That's a really (5) great book.
And you? Which book are you reading?
(1) A book about drug addiction, or a film/play/article about something....
(2) Heroine is not a very common word, normally we just say character for male or female
(3) You changed from present to past tense here, which makes it confusing. Stick with present or past.
(4) I don't quite understand the end!
(5) You use attractive to talk about people/art/buildings/views. An attractive book would mean that it is nice to look at!
Nice writing! I'm reading Game Of Thrones. It's great!
Which book are you reading recently?
I'm reading The Red Prescription written by Bi ShuMin. It tells the story of a pair of friends, they both working in the an addiction treatment center. one of them named Jane, she is the director of this special hospital, while another heroine is her friend who's is writing a book and take drug users as the a topic. So she begs Jane to help her by letter her to pretend to be a patient to know more about this topic. After a series of negotiations, she comes into this hospital and then experiences many twists and turns. Jane commits suicide because she got a serious addiction but leaves a posthumous paper. the muder?!?!?(Jane was murdered or she commited suicide? Or the patient was murdered?) is turn out to be one of her patients, and it cause a painting this pantient present to her as a gift.
-- I don't understand this sentence. Maybe this is what you are trying to say?
"It turns out Jane did not commit suicide, but rather she was murdered by one of her patients. This fact was discovered because of a painting the patient presented Jane as a gift."
It was a really attractive (attractive is only used with physical appearance normally. You could use: uplifting, emotionally appealing, sad, etc.) book.
And you? Which book are you reading?
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