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The story is happened in a small city in Vermont that is a small city during the winter time. The story is told by Connie (main midwife’s daughter), who is 14 years old. Sibly, who is also a midwife, but without a license. She made a mistake with a mom, who named Charlotte. She thought that Charlotte died giving birth to her child. Sibly tried to save Charlotte’s baby, but the baby wasn't dead. After that, Sibly was on a trial that continued for years. The trial finished leaving Sibly being found "Not Guilty.
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Checking my grammar.. who can help me?
The story is happened in a small city in Vermont that is a small city during the winter time. The story is told by Connie (main midwife’s daughter), who is 14 years old. Sibly, who is also a midwife, but without a license. She made a mistake with her mom, who named Charlotte. She thought that Charlotte died giving birth to her child. Sibly tried to save Charlotte’s baby, but the baby wasn't dead. After that, Sibly was on a trial that continued for years. The trial finished leaving Sibly being found "Not Guilty.
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