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Mistakes! Sorry,can you correct my mistakes?I am registrated at the English site and i need to write something about myself!I would like that it be right! " *Hello c:* I am from cold Murmansk!My hobbie is drawing with watercolour,hand made and other creative things.I am a student of art faculty and I would like to change the world,to make it more beautiful by dint of my creation.And I hope I will be able to perform this important mission!c: I always ready to communicate with people from other countries becouse I want to learn English very much.It is my great dream!"

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Mistakes!

Sorry,can you correct my mistakes?I am registrated at the English site and I need to write something about myself! I would like that it be right!
" *Hello c:*
I am from cold Murmansk! My hobby is drawing with watercolours, hand made art and other creative things. I am a student of the art faculty and I would like to change the world, to make it more beautiful by my creation. And I hope I will be able to perform this important mission! c:

I always ready to communicate with people from other countries becouse I want to learn English very much. It is my great dream!"

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Mistakes!

Sorry, can you correct my mistakes? I am registered with this English site and I need to write something about myself! I would like that it be to get it right!


" *Hello c:*
I am from cold Murmansk! My hobby is drawing with watercolours, hand made making things by hand and other creative things. I am a student of arts / an arts student faculty and I would like to change the world; to make it more beautiful by dint of my creation. And I hope I will be able to perform this important mission! c:

I am always ready to communicate with people from other countries because I really want to learn English very much. It is my greatest dream!"

 

Good luck ;-)

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Mistakes!

Sorry,can you correct my mistakes?I am registrated at the English site and i need to write something about myself!I would like that it be right!
" *Hello c:*
I am from cold Murmansk!My hobbie is drawing with watercolour,hand made and other creative things.I am a student of art faculty and I would like to change the world,to make it more beautiful by dint of my creation.And I hope I will be able to perform this important mission!c:

I always ready to communicate with people from other countries becouse I want to learn English very much.It is my great dream!"

Please remember to leave a space after all punctuation in English.

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Mistakes!

Sorry,can you correct my mistakes?I have registered with an English site and i need to write something about myself!I would like that it be grammatically correct!
" *Hello c:*
I am from Murmansk! It is cold here! My hobby is  drawing with watercolour,(not sure what is rrally meant here- painting/colouring with watercolours ) and crafts(including handicraft) .I am a student of the Faculty of Art and I would like to change the world,to make it more beautiful by dint of my creation.And I hope I will be fufill this important mission!c:

I am always ready to communicate with people from other countries becouse I want to learn English very much.It is a great dream of mine!"

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Mistakes! *corrected*

 

Excuse me, could you correct my mistakes? I registrated into an English website and I need to write a biography about myself! I'd love it if I wouldn't make any mistakes!

*Hello c:*


"I'm from Murmansk! It's really cold here. My hobbie is watercolor drawing, hand crafting and anything that has to do with creativity. I'm studying art and i'd like to make changes in the world, making it more beautiful with my creations. I hope I'll be able to achieve my goal!c:

I'm always looking forward into communicating with people from all over the world, for the fact that I want to learn English. It's my biggest dream!"

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