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Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so.What is your opinion? 1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement 2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details 3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary No one would deny that toriam is a booming business in China.The association could be both negative and positive and it is we who should decide.I think tourism will bring harm to environment. The reason why people assume that tourism will bring no harm to environment is that they believe the tourism facilitates econmic development is more important than the development of environment.Yet this idea is not entirely true as more econmic benefits may also lead to similarly horm to the environment.For example,Da Meisha in Shenzhen was the cleanest and most beautiful seaside i had ever seen. Nevertheless, with the development of tourism in Shenzhen, extensive people go to DaMeisha,they boost tourism,meanwhile,they bring tons of trash to DaMeisha.Hence,tourism will bring harm to the environment. All in all,apart from tourism,environment is similarily important to us.Thus tourism won't bring harm to environment when it is developed reasonably.

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Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?

Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so.What is your opinion?
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary

No one would deny that tourism is a booming business in China.The association could be both negative and positive and it is we who should decide.I think tourism will bring harm to environment.
The reason why people assume that tourism will bring no harm to environment is that they believe the tourism facilitating economic development is more important than the development of the environment.Yet this idea is not entirely true, as more econmic benefits may also lead to similarly harm to the environment.For example,Da Meisha in Shenzhen was the cleanest and most beautiful seaside I had ever seen. Nevertheless, with the development of tourism in Shenzhen, extensive numbers of people go to DaMeisha.  They boost tourism. Meanwhile,they bring tons of trash to DaMeisha.Hence,tourism will bring harm to the environment.
All in all,apart from tourism, the environment is similarily important to us.Thus tourism won't bring harm to the environment when it is developed reasonably.

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