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What's your purpose in you life? Hello everybody. I'd like to talk about the life with you guys. Whether we believe God or not, I think There is a special reason that we live a life. If I had a specific religion It would be clear Unfortunately I don't have. Instead of God, my family is the most important factor in my life. When my lovely daughter smiled at me I couldn't help smiling back. I'm eager for her happiness. But I know It couldn't be the religion. All of us have faced a difficulty in our life. at that time We need the existence of God. What I want to know is (If you have a special region) how can you have and What does your God say to you when you're confronted by serious problem. Thank you for reading!

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What's your purpose in your life?

Hello everybody.

I'd like to talk about the life with you guys.
Whether we believe in God or not, I think tThere is a special reason that we live a life.
If I had a specific religion iIt would be clear, but uUnfortunately I don't have one.
Instead of God, my family is the most important factor in my life.
When my lovely daughter smiled at me, I couldn't help smiling back. I'm eager for her happiness.
But I know iIt couldn't be about the religion.

All of us have faced a difficulty in our life lives. Aat that time wWe need to believe in the existence of God.
What I want to know is (iIf you have a special region) how can you have this religion/belief, and wWhat does your God say to you when you're confronted by a serious problem.

Thank you for reading!

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Hi ! Be carefull with the utilisation of capital letters. Your text is really deep. That's sure in life we need Good. It's very important to believe that there is a God. The family is important too.

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