TOEFL exam excersices

I'm studying for the TOEFL test, and there are some excercises I have to do.

1) What is your favorite holiday? Use reasons and details to support your response.
My favorite holiday is Christmas because It is an occasion when my whole family is reunited. I enjoy our traditions. For example, every Christmas evening we have different and delicious meals. The fireworks announce that it is 12:00 o'clock and it is a beautiful spectacle in the streets. Then, everybody opens their presents and the children play around.
That is why Christmas is my favorite holiday, an event that represents the family gathering.

2) Which person has helped you the most to get where you are today, and how has he or she helped you? Use examples to support your response.
The person who has helped me the most is my father. Since the beginning he has always supported me with the decisions I made. In addition, he has teached me a lot about my profession since we are going in the same professional direction. Also, he has taught me about my responsability as a professional.
I owe him a lot.

TOEFL exam excersices

I'm studying for the TOEFL test, and there are some excercises I have to do.

1) What is your favorite holiday? Use reasons and details to support your response.
My favorite holiday is Christmas because It it is an occasion when my whole  hole family are reunited. I enjoy our traditions, for example every Christmas evening we have a delicious meal with lots of diffent courses. full of different and delicious meals. The fireworks are set off atannounce us 12:00 o'clock and it is a beautiful spectacle in the streets. Then, everybody opens open their presents and the children play around.
That is why Christmas is my favorite holiday, an event that represents the family gathering.

2) Which person has helped you the most to get where you are today, and how has he or she helped you? Use examples to support your response.
The person who has helped me the most is my father. Since the beginning he always has supported me with the decisions I made. In addition he has taught teached me a lot about my profession since we are going in the same professional direction. Also, he has taught teached me about my responsability as a professional.
In conclusion I owe him a lot.