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A day with mess
Today, I just welcomed a guess guest (1) who brought me into the interesting world of something new that I have never touched it (2) before. It's kinda kind of (3) weird, and but I have to say I want to be in have this feeling again.
And today, I just had a fight with my friends (4) about some messy thing of dating place picking a place to go on a date (5). Well, I am really tired of asking her every time for choosing to choose a place to talk with me, and she is really uneasy and annoyed. Although However (6), she is one of my few friends that still connect with me.
And today Also, I am still worrying about money.
1. guess --> guest
"Guess" means to give someone an answer to a question when you don't know the answer. A "guest" is someone you invite to your home or somewhere.
2. have never touch --> have never touched
When we use most verbs with "have" (have touched, have heard, have jumped), we use the past tense of the verb. However, sometimes there are exceptions to this, so it's best to listen to or speak with natural speakers.
3. kinda --> kind of
"Kinda" isn't really a word in English when you write, but "kind of" sounds like "kinda" when we speak. You can use "kinda" in informal writing like when you're talking to friends.
4. friends --> friend
Whether you use "friends" or "friend" really depends on how many people you're talking about. If you're talking about one friend, then you can use "her" in your second sentence. However, if you're talking about many friends, then you need to use "them" in your second sentence.
5. some messy thing of dating place --> picking a place to go on a date
"Some messy thing" isn't ever said in English, and people would just say something like "the problem." However, since you already mentioned that you just had a fight with your friends, you're already saying that there was a problem, so you can just say that the problem was picking a place to go on a date.
6. Although --> However
"Although" is used to connect two thoughts together. In this case, you're not connecting two thoughts, so it's better to use "however," which carries the same meaning as "but."
You would use "although" in a sentence like, "Although she is really uneasy and annoyed, she is one of my few friends that still connect with me."
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