My Diary on April 11, 2015
Saturday, April 11th, 2015
Sunny
Tonight I went to a big grocery with mom. We took a walk there which cost us about 20 minutes, then bought a lot of tasty food. It was really a happy night. Although shopping is a small thing, it is not as important as your work and it will not cost you too much time either. Every time I go to a shopping mall to buy something needed, I can get a sense of happiness. So when my mom and I went out of the shopping mall, we were tired but happy.
It was an ordinary night, but it was also a lovely night.
Goodbuy Saturaday, and Good Night. :）
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My Diary on April 11, 2015
Saturday, April 11th, 2015
Sunny
Tonight I went to a big grocery/food supermarket with mom. We took a walk wandered/strolled around there which cost us and spent about 20 minutes doing so, then bought a lot of tasty/inviting/enticing/appetising (use thesaurus.com for synonyms) food. It was really a happy night. Although shopping is a small thing, and it is not as important as your work, and it will not cost you too much time either. Every time I go to a shopping mall to buy something needed, I can get a sense of happiness/satisfaction. So when my mom and I went out of emerged from the shopping mall, we were tired but happy.
It was an ordinary night, but it was also nevertheless/nonetheless a lovely night. (nice!)
Goodbuy/bye (or were you making a nice pun?) Saturday, and Good Night. :）
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My Diary on April 11, 2015
Saturday, April 11th, 2015
Sunny
Tonight I went to a big grocery with mom. We took a walk there which cost lasted us about 20 minutes, then we bought a lot of tasty food. It was really a happy night. Although shopping is a small thing, it is not as important as your work and it will not cost you too much time either. Every time I go to a shopping mall to buy something needed, I can get a sense of happiness. So when my mom and I went out of the shopping mall, we were tired but happy.
It was an ordinary night, but it was also a lovely night.
Goodbuyye Saturaday, and Good Night. :）
Nice note, any questions, feel free to ask:)
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My Diary on April 11, 2015
Saturday, April 11th, 2015
Sunny
Tonight I went to a big grocery shop with mom. We took a walk there which took us about 20 minutes, then bought a lot of tasty food. It was really a happy night. Although shopping is a small thing, it is not as important as your work and it will not cost you too much time either. Every time I go to a shopping mall to buy something I need, I can get a sense of happiness. So when my mom and I came out of the shopping mall, we were tired but happy.
It was an ordinary night, but it was also a lovely night.
Goodbye Saturday, and Good Night. :）
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mom's time! :)
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