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work for children
Working during childhood: such a controversial issue! There is a debate if children should work or not , and it's a triky topic.
Some people may think that children shouldn't work because they need to be able to spend their time both in studying and in playing, and that free time increases their creativity , their ability to relate to other children without being arrogant or selfish .
So in one time they learn many useful rules from the interaction with other children, and that's why studying and playing sholud be their priority .
Moreover, if a child starts to work and begins to earn money, they could loose their interest in Learning and that would be undoubtely wrong
On the other hand, some people could think that children, who work, can gain many positive skills, such as achiving a sense of duty in order to take to an end the work that they are ment to do , understanding the real value of money and becoming more aware of the sacrifice that their parents have to do every day .
From my point of view, as a mother of three sons, children shouldn't work (I mean children, not teen agers for whom work is very useful) because parents have other more appropriate methods to teach them the same things in a less potentially dangerous way
I tried. IELTS?? :D
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