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What Are You Thinking on a Spring Morning Today is a good day, before I waked up, when I was lying in bed it seemed like I was able to feel the sunshine shining through the curtain, which finally touched my face softly. It was at that time I was more convinced that "the spring is coming". There is a Chinese old saying goes, ——the whole year’s work depends on a good start in spring. I supposed that long ago when the author was awaked on one day morning he maybe had the same feeling like mine A good day always make people think of something: what they should do during this brand new day? Do I need to make some changes in the rest of the year? Are the sakura flowers blossoming now? How about raising a dog to accompany with me? Or, is my darling missing me just like the thing what I am doing now? Or maybe, nobody care anything, it is simply an ordinary day. Nothing will happen to change your life, no different things you have to take a try and no new friends you are going to meet with. Anyway, this is life. We had better believe in something which can make us feel be loved. So I left from my bed quickly and went to the kitchen to prepare for the breakfast. My stomach was telling me she is hungry, because she is always honest to me, I should certainly be nice to her.

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What Are You Thinking on a Spring Morning

Today is a good day, before I waked woke up, when while I was lying in bed it seemed like I was able to feel the sunshine shining through the curtain, which and it ('which' could refer to the curtain) finally touched my face softly.

It was at that time I was more convinced that "the spring is coming". There is an old Chinese old saying which goes,

——the whole year’s work depends on a good start in to spring. I supposed that long ago when the author awoke was awaked on one day morning he maybe had the same feeling like mine as me

A good day always make people think of something: what should they should do during this brand new day? I think do I (you started with 'people' and 'they') need to make some changes in for the rest of the year? Are the sakura flowers blossoming now? How about raising a dog to accompany with me/keep me company? Or, is my darling missing me just like the thing what I am doing missing him now?

Or maybe, nobody cares about anything, it is simply an ordinary day. Nothing will happen to change your life, no different things you have to attempt take a try and no new friends you are going to meet with.

Anyway, this is life. We had better believe in something which can make us feel be we are loved. So I left got up from my bed, quickly, and went to the kitchen to prepare for the breakfast. My stomach was telling me she is 'I am hungry' - because 'she' (normally the stomach is 'it' but you call call it 'she' if you like!) is always honest to me, I should certainly be nice to her.

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great work, it's a beautiful article. I cannot find any mistake.

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