who can help me？Thank you very much。
The following sentences are not correct from the perspective of stylistics，but I dont known how to correct them。who can help me？Thank you very much。
（1）I have come to request your assistance.
（2）Arnold was willing to pay the bill, and he suddenly found his billfold was empty.
（3）I think that he knows that that girl is not the one for him to marry.
（4）His uncle is not like her uncles. Her uncle takes more chances than his uncle does.
（5）I got the impression that his expression of sympathy was insincere.
（6）With reference to our telephone conversation of yesterday afternoon regarding repairs to my central-heating system, I have since come to the conclusion that the amount that you calculated that the repairs would cost is excessive, and I have decided that I shall make alternative
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who can help me？Thank you very much。
The following sentences are not correct from the perspective of stylistics，but I dont known how to correct them。who can help me？Thank you very much。
（1）I have come to request your assistance. [Correct]
（2）Arnold was willing to pay the bill, but when he tried to pay, he found to his suprise that his billfold was empty. [Modified]
（3）I think that he realizes that that girl is not the one for him to marry. [Modified]
（4）His uncle is not like hers. Her uncle takes more chances than his uncle does. [Modified]
（5）I got the impression that his expression of sympathy was insincere. [Correct]
（6）With reference to our telephone conversation of yesterday afternoon regarding repairs to my central-heating system, I have since come to the conclusion that the amount that you calculated for the cost of repairs would cost is excessive, and I have decided that I shall make alternative arrangements. [Modified]
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