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I had sent a small composition yesterday.

I had tried to send a composition yesterday, but I found a lot of mistakes in it. fortunately Fortunately a Canadian cutie pionts pointed out some problems to me, and revises revised it. I very much appreciate her ., but I still feeling feel a little embarrassed. I hope more people to will criticize my composition, I'll appreciate you that, If you wanna learn Chinese , I will absolutely help you. I have some social networking software, such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagrams Instagram, skype Skype, Wechat, QQ, etc. you You can contact me by it any of these.

A few notes:

1. Spaces come after periods (.) and commas (,) but not before

2. Capitalize letters that come directly after periods and proper nouns (names of software programs, companies, etc.)

3. Make sure to stay consistent with your use of past tense, if it's something that happened in the past.

4. If you list many things in one sentence you cannot simply refer to them all as "it" in the next sentence, you must say something like "these" or "those" because there is more than one thing being listed. I chose to add the phrase "any of these" since someone would be able to contact you by whatever method they choose from among the ones you listed.

Great job, the mistakes you made do not hinder comprehension.