2015.4.5
It has already been one month since I arrived at Toronto. I still can't say the sentense I want to say quickly, but I got used to listening to English. Today, I went to Niagara Falls with my host brother and his friends. They're all canadian. It was a good opportunity for me to learn English. The scenenery of Niagara Falls was breathtaking. I want to visit again because the weather wasn't good. I had a very good time thanks to my Canadian friends.
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2015.4.5/May 4, 2015 (It's more common to read dates this way)
It has already been one month since I arrived at Toronto. I still can't say the sentence (spelling error) I want to say quickly, but I got used to listening to English. Today, I went to Niagara Falls with my host brother and his friends. They're all Canadian. It was a good opportunity for me to learn English. The scenenery of Niagara Falls was breathtaking. I want to visit again because the weather wasn't good. I had a very good time thanks to my Canadian friends.
Well done, keep up the good work! （＾ω＾）
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2015.4.5
It has already been one month since I arrived in Toronto. I still can't say the sentences I want to say quickly, but I have gotten used to listening to English. Today, I went to Niagara Falls with my host brother and his friends. They're all Canadian. It was a good opportunity for me to learn English. The scenery of Niagara Falls was breathtaking. I want to visit it again because the weather wasn't good. I had a very good time thanks to my Canadian friends.
^"host brother" is not a used term in English. You probably mean host, unless your brother is Canadian.
^Otherwise, good work.
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Thank you, Regy!!
I can have many good experiences here. I'll keep learning English. :)
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Wow.. you're pretty daring for going all over to Toronto in order to practice English. I may say it seems you're doing a great job. :D I hope you keep enjoying learning English, especially having awesome sightseeing spots as a bonus (^-^)
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