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this's the part one of the sitting on the beach !! it's the summer , welcome summer , i determine to go to the beach , exciting and enjoying with my friends so i call my friends , iam passionate to swim and sitting under the warm sun , we arrive at 7.00 am precise , we begin to extend on the beach some go to the water and some sit on the beach , in this beach which we usually go if you turn your head left and look there , you will see a cliff , that's my favorite cliff , i like to take my armchair and go there to enjoy by the blue sky , white sand and i usually see groups of geese and water birds it's imaginiation picnic with the nature , so i begin to write my frist paper of my book this book i will name it ' memories on the beach "

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this's This is* the part one of the sitting on the beach !!

It's the summer.  Welcome summer.  I am determined to go to the beach.  It is exciting and enjoyingable to be with my friends.  So I call my friends.  I'm passionate to swim and sitting under the warm sun.  We arrive at 7.00 am precisely.  We begin to extend^ on the beach; some go to the water and some sit on the beach.  On this beach which we usually go to, if you turn your head left and look there , you will see a cliff.  That's my favorite cliff.  I like to take my armchair` and go there to enjoy by the blue sky and white sand. and I usually see groups of geese and water birds.  It's an imaginiation imaginary picnic with the nature, so I begin to write my first paper of my book. This book I will name it, 'Memories on the Beach.'~

 

* "is" is not always contracted in writing

^ not sure this is the word you want to use

` I highly doubt you haul around an armchair.  Maybe a "lounge chair"

 

~The way this sentence is written is not colloquial, but it might be considered "advanced" or "sophisticated" English on formal papers (like for school).  You could write this sentence in any of the following ways:

 

Casual: I will name this book, "Memories on the Beach."

Semi-formal: This book will be named, "Memories on the Beach."

Formal (Written): This book, I will name it, "Memories on the Beach."

Formal (Written): This book I will name, "Memories on the Beach."

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