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Sabrina
Day2- Asia impression- China These days I talked with my Korean and Hong Kong friends, we were talking about the salary and living cost in Asia countries. We all agree China can be the one growing the fastest country in Asia. I remember when I was working in Shanghai at 2011 the living cost is similar to lower than Taipei, however last year I went to Shanghai again, I was surprised by their living cost which was much higher than 2011. Well there is another phenomenon give a strong feeling to me about China going so fast which is mobile game. According to one business article nowadays the Taiwan mobile game TVCF there are 70% from China. please help me to correct my article, thanks!!

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Thanks a lot Diego !
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Sabrina, when we are talking about years, we have to use the preposition "in" before. Like: In 2011. We usually use the preposition "at" for places and "on" when we say the day. Like: On December 25th. :)
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Pretty nice!

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