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Sabrina
Day 1 –homework One of the hardest things in the world I think is persistence. People always have a lot of desires, becoming rich、having fit body and so on. However, only few people can achieve their goal, why is the factor leaded to the result. Lack of persistence will be one of the factor causes failure. So how to keep oneself stick to doing something with interesting is very important. Normally higher motivation can have stronger faith to do something.

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Day 1 –homework

One of the hardest things in the world I think is persistence.
People always have different desires: becoming rich,、having a fit body and so on. However, only few people can achieve their goal. Why is this a factor?  It leads to a result. Lack of persistence, will be one of the factors that causes failure. So how to keep oneself "sticking to a plan" to doing something with interest, it is very important. Normally higher motivation, gives a person a goal to achieve something.

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Please help me to correct my writing, thanks!
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I'm totally agree. People can do everything they want if they are motivated and self encouraged.

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