My Sister

The first two things you realise about my sister is the fact that she is really pretty and funny. She has got a long straight black hair. Her brown eyes are full and bright. and their form is oval and brown. Her lips are really sensual [maybe a different adjective like full] and they look like a heart. She is well built, because she practises different sports. She is just a little taller than me. Her complexion is pale fair, although in summer she becomes tanned. I love her because she is completely honest with me, and because she always she tells me the truth. She is living with me. I don't like it when she is cheeky, but I don't really mind. She is a person lively person, but can be a little nervous shy. To be honest we are both really nervous shy. In some cases [or sometimes], we annoy each other, but we get to always work out our problems. The main reason is because we love us each other.

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