my English

hello everyone! I'm a Chinese student studying in Jilin University now.Although i don't major in English,i wanna  I want to learn this language well.Bbecause I want to travel other countries after graduating from my university.

As we all know, English is the widest most widely spoken language (or you may use "universally spoken". Off course, English is also very interesting., English songs are great, etc.
but  However, my spoken English is not good. so i wanna That's why (For this reason, / This is the reason that) I  want to find new friends to promote increase my level.otherswise, In return, I am willing to teach you Chinese. think Thank you!

Hi Tian,

It's great to hear you are learning English. I hope you achieve all your goals in learning English, especially in speaking.  I have made corrections to your entry below in pink.  I hope my correction helps you!

Becky : )

my English

hello everyone! I'm a Chinese, studying in Jilin University now. Though I don't major in English,I wanna to learn this language well.B because i want to travel to other countries after graduating from my university. As we all know,English is the widest biggest language. Of course,English is also very interesting.  English songs are great!  etc..
but My spoken English is not good. so I wanna to find new friends to promote improve
my level.  otherswise Also, I am willing to help you with Chinese. Thank you!