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WHEN IN ROME DO AS THE ROMANS DO. It all began when I woke myself up with my own snoring, I was sure that this day would make perfect. Suddenly, my parents came to my bedroom and they said if I could stay in uncle and aunt’s house because they had to travel from Lima to Madrid due to some troubles. After all, I went to live with them for 2 months, fortunately, I had two cousins with my similar ages, and I could play with them. Apparently, all things would be good until I started learning about their customs. First off all, they had the custom of sleeping at 9:00 pm and waking up at 7:30 am all the days. Eventually, I couldn’t do this. Surprisingly, one day, my uncle told me: You’ll have to get used to getting up early. I was angry. Furthermore, I must eat a different type of food my mom cooked, I didn’t like eating the food of my aunt. Moreover, I could only watch the TV for one hour every day and read a book in a week every week. Surprisingly, I got used to it in the end. Nowadays, I go on doing those activities and I like it so much. When in Rome do as the Romans do.

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WHEN IN ROME, DO AS THE ROMANS DO.

It all began when I woke myself up with my own snoring. I was sure that this day would make be perfect. Suddenly, my parents came to my bedroom, and they said if I could would stay at my uncle and aunt’s house because they had to travel from Lima to Madrid due to some troubles.
After all, I went to live ended up living with them for 2 months. Fortunately, I had two cousins with my similar in ages, and I could play with them.
Apparently, all things It seemed like everything would be good until I started learning about their customs.
First off of all, they had the custom of sleeping at 9:00 pm and waking up at 7:30 am all the daysevery day. Eventually, I couldn’t do this. Surprisingly, one day my uncle told me, "You’ll have to get used to getting up early." I was angry.
Furthermore, I must had to eat a different type of food than my mom cooked. I didn’t like eating the food of my aunt my aunt's food. Moreover, I could only watch the TV for one hour every day, and I had to read a whole book in a week every week.
Surprisingly, I got used to it in the end. Nowadays, Now I go on doing those activities and I like it so them very much. When in Rome, do as the Romans do.

 

You write very well, Dennis! Keep up the good work!

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