Cloudy Day
Hello World,
I have just woken up, The day is unhappy. This night, it had been raining all the time. Now, it seem that the rain has stopped. My day has just begin. Good day everyone.
Bye
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Cloudy Day
Hello World.
I have just woken up. The day It is an unhappy day. Last night, it had been rained all night. Now, it seems (that)the rain has stopped. My day has just begun. Good day everyone.
Bye
(better without)
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Cloudy Day
Hello World,
I have just woken up, The day/weather looks grey is unhappy. This Last night, it had been was raining all the time/night long. Now, it seems that the rain has stopped. My day has just begun. Good day everyone.
Bye
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have a good day too and be happy. But in my country now, it's afternoon.
And below, here is some correction for your notebook. "it seems that the rain has stopped. My day has just begun, Good day to everyone."
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